TOTAL DEVOTION

 

 

I'm feeling you... 
Every night and every day 
The passion in your words 
Guide me on my way 

You stir up the butterflies 
You raise the need in me 
When you move to kiss my lips 
Everything inside me breaks free 

You’re a sweet seductive passion flower 
Your nectar has my bee beset 
I long to sample your sweetness 
I was bewitched the first day we met 

Can anyone be more alluring? 
Your beauty has me possessed 
It has stolen away all my reason 
Leaving me no ability to protest 

I long to be your slave 
Whipped in the shape of your will
Break me apart in tiny fractures 
Just let me live in the pieces that you spill 

Do to me whatever 
Just promise me your words or flesh 
I will be your eternal servant
A eager slave to your every request 

I'd accept full annihilation 
Let my remnants become your dreams 
Living in your inner thoughts 
A vestige of what true love means 

I am totally devoted 
I love you in every way 
Lost in pure emotion 
I am a ardent slave to your way 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Reviews

[Azriel]

wow this is great, you captured the idea of "total devotion" so well, don't think it could have been done any better than this. loved it.

[RainC]

This is beautiful! Im having a hard time copying and pasting my favorite stanza but it's the second to the last. Taking such a journey with you was amazing! And like every footprint left in the sand.....it's the sign of anew! Enjoyed!

[Brandon S. Whitten]

Love the passion in your words. This can almost go either way, with a few changes here and there. Excellent read and write.