THE FLAVOR OF LOVE

Men are funny creatures but they mean no harm. This is a luscious poem of desire.

 

 

She is delectable and luscious
A flavor you would love to taste
A rare exotic fruit of humanity
That should never go to waste

 

Her smell has the lure of temptation
A simple whiff will pull you right in
Then before you know hedonism has got you
She'll have your thoughts filled with tangible sin

 

Her scent of love can engulf you
Its aroma will drive you insane
Delicious, inviting, and intoxicating
She will linger inside of your brain

 

Oh, savory woman of nectar
We long to hold you inside our embrace
Slowly sampling your ambrosia
While we relish your mouth-watering taste

 

© 2013 Eddie Phillips

Reviews

[imiey]

good art eddie......i totally love it

[Clara]

A luscious poem, Eddie. Well-penned.

[Rosaria_V]

This is really good, I think it's interesting how you preserve a women in this poem haha. Great job

[Sheila Kline]

I adore it! It is soooooo "man like"!....lol

You have chosen the perfect image - live the guys holding the bananas and cantelopes to get the message across as to what you are thinking! Your words take us down the isle of supermarket desire!

A really clever write my friend!

[Baby Ricochet]

Good poem. I like it when chicks smell like Newport Menthols. Don't ask.

[Cody Williams]

Another good one Eddie! Thanks for sharing!

-CW

[Rita L. Sev]

Luscious indeed! This is a wonderful insight into what goes on in a man's mind... That picture is perfect! Enjoyed this piece, Eddie!

[SyberRose]

I loved your poem...and the photo too...nicely done Eddie...an attractive lady but I dont think those guys are her type...ha

~SyberRose

[Eddie Phillips]

They aren't her type. :) She seems to be in her own mind. She is not even aware that they are just staring at her. Thank you for reading and leaving such a whimsical and sweet review.

[Amy Azra Dean]

The words you have have used worked so well together, in fact looking at the picture of the supermarket its made me hungry! A sweet poem that works!

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you for reading it and leaving a honest review.

[Derek Nall]

Haha I love the picture...they're like damn I want to sample that ambrosia!

[Eddie Phillips]

LOL that's why I chose it. Its a funny but true picture.