I write poems on race from time to time. I feel that racism is a lie. We cannot continue to accept the lies and stereotypes. If we all embrace the fact that we are brother (and sisters) we will live a more holistic life.
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OK - I haven't even read the poem yet, and I had to comment first on the tag line - "Racism is a lie! We are all related. Embrace that!" - Love it! And that adorable, tender picture! Ok - now to read...
Eddie, this is an amazing piece. Strong, proud, no judgment, laying it on the line - society has spouted the ignorance of racism far too long. Excellent poem, outstanding message.
Eddie, i feel the passion in your work each time i read. It's one of those pieces that makes me appreciate the writers gift and strengthens my effrontery to defy the odds that have been holding the black man. I'm very glad you shared this.
Bless you!!
#I am a Black Woman!
Eddie, even within people of the same 'race' there is another disease like racism - it is called sectarianism and it is rife here in Belfast. It causes one person to treat another like a subhuman because they are born into a different religion and don't pray at the same place of worship. Religion, not the colour of skin is used as the lie.
I respect and cherish your writing Eddie particularly when you write like this, my brother.
OK - I haven't even read the poem yet, and I had to comment first on the tag line - "Racism is a lie! We are all related. Embrace that!" - Love it! And that adorable, tender picture! Ok - now to read...
Eddie, this is an amazing piece. Strong, proud, no judgment, laying it on the line - society has spouted the ignorance of racism far too long. Excellent poem, outstanding message.
While I dislike the religious affiliation in this writing, that is personal bias and has little to do with the quality. I agree that racism (or any kind of unjust oppression) is, to be frank, fucked up. Racism is usually just a manifestation of hate in a way that people see as "justified". Perhaps they don't see it as bullying, they see it as alienating a blight upon society. However, this is foolish. The amount of melanin in your skin does not make you any more or less a good quality person. Your actions determine who you are and how people see you (or rather, they should), not a color.
Although I was just stating my opinion instead of actually reviewing. This was well written and i liked the passion that went into it. I don't see very many writings nowadays that have that "f**k you, you are wrong" attitude and it's nice to see a change of pace. Good job Eddie.
I really enjoy reading material that focus on race relations as well as unity. I'm actually writing a piece about my experiences as a woman of different ethnicities, so this definitely stuck with me. I always imagine a life free of ignorance and stereotyping, and it brings me joy. We are all family, and you did a lovely job as always spreading that message. Thank you whole-heartedly for sharing. Beautifully done (:
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