RAISE YOUR HAND

I wanted to write a poem that spoke about the patriotic military heroes that have laid down their lives. I think it is a good poem and honors them.

 

 

 

We raised our hands in her honor; to become more than just our best
We raised it to confirm that we could stand the test
We raised our hands to serve and fight because liberty is never free
We raised our hands before Heaven so that our God could clearly see
We said the words with conviction; committed them to our soul
We said the words, to swear we are the protectors of freedom's goals

 

We swore to support our country from whatever threats she may see
We swore to be there for her on land, air, and sea
We swore to defend her in all conflicts, trials, and war
We swore to lay down our lives on any earthly shore

 

She promised she'd always honor us by keeping her dreams alive
She kept that precious promise when we laid down our lives
She lowered us in honor, with our flag out proud to see
She lowered us in distinction, proclaiming us the bastions of the free
We asked that she not be saddened as we are lowered into time
For we know others will take her charge and raise their hands up high next time

 

© 2012 Eddie Phillips

Author's Note

I wanted to write a poem that spoke about the patriotic military heroes that have laid down their lives. I think it is a good poem and honors them.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

That picture reminds me of me... back in the day... goodness I'm getting old... I served for 8 years with the Marine Corps... the verse has a resounding voice... throughout the entire read... you feel as if one is on stage saying this to a crowd of people...

[Eddie Phillips]

I wanted to have a ring like the creeds we quote in the military. I wanted it to be militaristic in its delivery. Thanks for reading and connecting with this poem.

[Kwiksie Ifediora]

It is a good poem Eddie and i think thoughtful and sensitive to boot.
It is important to show our appreciation and gratitude for sacrifices made in our interest.
Well done. :)

[Eddie Phillips]

Thank you for reading and understanding the message I was trying to send.

[Eddie Phillips]

Please comment. Bad or good I would appreciate the feedback. I am new on the site.