What Makes You So Saintly?

What Makes You So Saintly?

A Poem by Elana Juli Royson

What makes you so saintly as to judge me by my sins,

Whereas I should have forgiven, instead gave up and caved in?

I'd like to see you do differently while suppressing a fit of rage,

And don't bother patronizing me by saying it comes with age.

I know you think you're above me and in some ways that may be true,

But hating me for my repented sin shows who's better than who.


~ E J Royson

© 2014 Elana Juli Royson


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Well done. This is a short but powerful display of emotion. Way to come full circle!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Well put poet. Disregard the conceit and carry on :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Elana Juli Royson
Elana Juli Royson

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