Closure

Closure

A Poem by Elizabeth J. Gelinger
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Summer Haiku

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No more pretty words
The silence won't let me write
Because I don't love

© 2016 Elizabeth J. Gelinger


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Going on separate ways, where like a part of the story has gone void, with no more emotions left to give or to take. Thank you for sharing the words of "Closure"

Posted 8 Years Ago


Interesting concept, the absence of love ties the tongue and drys up the words to silence the poet. I have seen this happen a time or two, it is a cruel fate for a crafter of words but an outstanding haiku for you. I give it five out of five Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

Posted 8 Years Ago


Silence can be deadly. In my free days. Better noise of bars and cafes to weaken the pain and the sorrow. I do understand this poem. Thank you Elizabeth for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


...and already you've found a truism of poetry... for it to have emotion YOU have to feel.

But there comes a time
the silence becomes so loud
tears are personal...

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on September 6, 2016
Last Updated on September 6, 2016
Tags: haiku, poem, poetry, summer, not, love, anymore


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