Fate

Fate

A Poem by Elizabeth J. Gelinger
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Summer Haiku

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Porcelain, glass, souls
Everything that once existed
Will fatefully break

© 2016 Elizabeth J. Gelinger


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You have stated fate very well. Nice write. Valentine

Posted 8 Years Ago


Everything will eventually break following the rule mortality... Your Haiku presents the reality of this world where nothing is permanent... Here today gone tomorrow... Such a great work...

Sincerely
Dhiman

Posted 8 Years Ago


Elizabeth J. Gelinger

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the review
i guess we just eventually fade away,great write

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elizabeth J. Gelinger

8 Years Ago

Thanks for the review
 wordman

8 Years Ago

my pleasure !

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Added on May 13, 2016
Last Updated on May 13, 2016
Tags: porcelain, glass, souls, love, haiku, break, summer


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