Ouch

Ouch

A Poem by Jean-Pierre Garcia
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Whichever hurts less in the sun

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A sunburn stings less than being called 
a dog left behind
unwanted
with dues paid
but membership unmade-while
being a part of something bigger
others casually increase the pointed
pointers-giggling
and the teasing continues on
sure there's a difference between
a veggie burger and 
a ribbing
ribeye
it's all a matter of taste
and whichever hurts
the stomache less

© 2011 Jean-Pierre Garcia


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I love this! Clever work love! A matter of taste what hurts the most! Brilliantly done! xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Added on July 24, 2011
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Jean-Pierre Garcia
Jean-Pierre Garcia

Seattle, WA



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I'm a gnomic meanderer. I have just the right amount of neuroticism to lock myself in my room to write, but somehow have faked myself out of it by writing on the go or for the student newspaper I wo.. more..

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