Reflection

I was beautiful when you found me,

Strong, thin, with darkened skin and flowing hair. 

You lingered too long in my realm of fantasy,

I fell in love without consent.

It happened when I saw your thoughts,

Streaming across the darkened water.

It happened when you kissed me slow,

And stripped me down to bare bones.

You were stubborn when I found you,

An awkward mess of controlling attempts.

I worked my way into your thoughts,

Your intrigue was my thrill.  

It happened when I found your dreams,

Pieced together with elaborate plans.

It happened when we inhaled smoke,

I found securities in all my downfalls.

I was beautiful when you found me,

Now a disaster of mangled emotions,

No longer concerned with being exposed,

With everything to lose.

Would you believe me if I told you?

Reviews

[Teenage Romeo]

damn.

[Suditi]

Beautifully written. :)

[khalid]

that is very nice piece of writing. i like it