Firsts

Another beginning, a new start

Leaving everything behind

Every friendship, every romance:

Home

Bonds broken, never renewed

I want to belong

I want an identity

I want a home

Not these endless firsts

That never last

Reviews

[KAin]

If it's any consolation, many find that there is no place, person, or thing in the world that they can pledge loyalty to outside themselves. (Okay, that's not consoling at all)
However!!! Fortunately writers have whole worlds inside them that they can believe in... places that they belong to. The world of ideas and the blank page...
Keep up the good work!

[Sarah Lynn]

Great poem! I do indeed like it . I dont think this is the kind of poem to put in the Rhyme Ti me group since, well, it doesnt rhyme . But great job on this, i like it!(:

[DezChampion]

I think the message here is conveyed well. The thought process is clear and I get the feeling of wanting more. I don't know why but that last "But" is throwing me off slightly.

[egg13]

I had my doubts on that too. Thanks, it's fixed now

[Reese Grant]

As a child, this was my reality. No sense of who or where I belonged.

[egg13]

mine too, unfortunately

[Rose of many colours]

The character is a drifter, He is searching but also wants to be found. Short poem but it has a lot of messages

[Scott Mou]

Very Interesting. I feel this conveys the feeling of lonliness(?) well.