"Christmas Came" is a song I wrote when I was 10 years old about the excitement a kid feels when Christmas finally comes and believing in Santa Claus while everyone tells you that he doesn't exist.
One day
I woke up and it started snowing the whole place
I saw the date
And it was as I knew the Christmas Day
I got out of my bed
I ran up to my balcony
I shouted: Everyone Christmas came!
Ohh yeah
Christmas came!
Christmas came
Christmas oh will stay
I don't care for what you say
Santa Claus will come right away
To... my house
To your house
To everybody's house
Christmas came
Christmas oh will stay
You look under my tree
There are some cookies
You look again there
There's also some milk
That's for Santa Claus
(Yeah Santa Claus)
Oh my Gosh! He's here!
Hi Santa Claus! (Ha, hi Santa Claus!)
Say hi to everyone! (Ha, hi to everyone!)
Hello there, fellow kids
If you're on the good kids list
I will give you many presents
Like dolls, board games and anything else! (Yeah!)
I wrote these lyrics when I was 10 years old (in 2020) and I didn't really know how to speak English that good so please ignore any grammar/vocabulary etc. mistakes! Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas if you celebrate!
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I took your Author's Note into account, when I read this. No problem. After all, this site can be used; just as we please. It matters not, how good people are; unless they allow it to matter to themselves. And, people learn to improve by experimenting; and trying out others.
Anyway, this piece gushes with enthusiasm; and your childish thoughts of the time. Imaginative, and just so keen to embrace the Christmas Spirit.?
Clearly, you seem as if you wanted Christmas to take you; and dominate you for that brief time.
Even now, 'tis the season to be jolly; though be it in adult ways. Enjoy this special day, during that lovely time of the month; as part of each and every year's natural cycle.
Posted 11 Hours Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Hours Ago
Yes of course! I posted these lyrics as like a holiday special piece since they are pretty nostalgic.. read moreYes of course! I posted these lyrics as like a holiday special piece since they are pretty nostalgic for me because I remember writing them and singing them to all of my friends at school! That's the only reason I posted them, otherwise they would just sit in the piece of paper they are on forever. Happy Holidays!
10 Hours Ago
Sounds fair enough. Thanks for clarifying, a bit more for me.
what a blast from the past this must be! this is a work of pure joy. dont worry, santa is real. but it's not only in presents but something more about this day that brings a great joy to all the world.
thank you for sharing this work and merr christmas!
This is beautiful Efxaris! I don't believe in Santa but still I write notes to Santa and place food for him. Great work!
Posted 10 Hours Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Hours Ago
Thank you so much Martiya! I don't believe in Santa anymore either, these lyrics are from when I was.. read moreThank you so much Martiya! I don't believe in Santa anymore either, these lyrics are from when I was 10 when I did believe and I didn't listen to anyone who told me otherwise. It's super kind of you to write notes to him and make sure that he isn't hungry!
Wishing you the joy of Christmas and the sweetness it wraps around each-every one of our emotions
Posted 11 Hours Ago
1 of 2 people found this review constructive.
10 Hours Ago
Happy Holidays and Merry Christmas to you too if you celebrate of course! Wishing that you'll have a.. read moreHappy Holidays and Merry Christmas to you too if you celebrate of course! Wishing that you'll have a wonderful time during the holidays!
By the way I love the way you worded this! It's so poetic!
10 Hours Ago
Oh yes, I celebrate! Looking out of my bedroom
window into a miraculously sunny day, So many.. read moreOh yes, I celebrate! Looking out of my bedroom
window into a miraculously sunny day, So many birds flitting, singing carols, teeny clouds swaying
Later will be off to my older sister's house to meet up with a few more siblings, friends three and two little children for lunch... when its ready! Lots of chat in the interim. And you, do you celebrate today or earlier in December? Whenever, my young friend.. so hope you smiled or will.. the world loves smiles and welcomes them, shares them, donates them, bathes in their kindness because it's the perfect way to feel .. oh yes!!!!
I took your Author's Note into account, when I read this. No problem. After all, this site can be used; just as we please. It matters not, how good people are; unless they allow it to matter to themselves. And, people learn to improve by experimenting; and trying out others.
Anyway, this piece gushes with enthusiasm; and your childish thoughts of the time. Imaginative, and just so keen to embrace the Christmas Spirit.?
Clearly, you seem as if you wanted Christmas to take you; and dominate you for that brief time.
Even now, 'tis the season to be jolly; though be it in adult ways. Enjoy this special day, during that lovely time of the month; as part of each and every year's natural cycle.
Posted 11 Hours Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Hours Ago
Yes of course! I posted these lyrics as like a holiday special piece since they are pretty nostalgic.. read moreYes of course! I posted these lyrics as like a holiday special piece since they are pretty nostalgic for me because I remember writing them and singing them to all of my friends at school! That's the only reason I posted them, otherwise they would just sit in the piece of paper they are on forever. Happy Holidays!
10 Hours Ago
Sounds fair enough. Thanks for clarifying, a bit more for me.