"A Silent Wish" expresses the quiet longing of wanting to be remembered on a special day, like your birthday, capturing the feeling of being forgotten and the hope for recognition.
I hope that you had a happy birthday. And, quite sad that you expressed a perception that some people seem to find it difficult; to remember that special day in your yearly calendar of life.
You mentioned a heartfelt longing, for people to wish you a "happy birthday"; just those two simple words. Not much to hope for, and you certainly should not have to ask.
Best wishes, and here is a late birthday cake🎂for you.
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4 Days Ago
Thank you I actually had an amazing birthday fortunately! I am glad you really understood the meanin.. read moreThank you I actually had an amazing birthday fortunately! I am glad you really understood the meaning of this poem and thank you for the birthday cake lol
Happy belated birthday Efxaris! and dont worry you are not alone, nobody seems to remember me. in fact, im pretty sure nobody really loves me at all. so reading this work, i could really relate. to be forgotten, to be abandoned, to feel like you are invisible. it hurts. but i keep going, keep writing.
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Thank you so much!!! I'm so sorry, but don't worry, there are people who love you I'm 100% sure! I u.. read moreThank you so much!!! I'm so sorry, but don't worry, there are people who love you I'm 100% sure! I understand how you feel I've felt like this before and sometimes now too. Thankfully I finally didn't relate to this poem this year and my birthday was lovely but in the past pretty much everyone forgot about me unfortunately! I hope you never relate to this poem again because it is really sad.
Happy belated birthday Efxaris! I am part of your group. This poem is beautiful, I always feel like this on my day. Thanks for sharing.
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4 Days Ago
Thank you so much Martiya! I am sorry you feel like this on your birthday, I hope you don't relate t.. read moreThank you so much Martiya! I am sorry you feel like this on your birthday, I hope you don't relate to this poem on your next. Hoping for a wonderful time at the Young Writers' Comfort Corner!
Happy Birthday, a day late. My friend Emmajoygreen sent this to me to read. It is so good. I think we all feel this way on our birthdays, it should be a day just for us. I have another friend that claims the whole month is her birthday month, so keep celebrating. Thanks so much for sharing your beautiful writing.
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Thank you so much! I am glad she sent it to you! That is very relatable and it is nice that your fri.. read moreThank you so much! I am glad she sent it to you! That is very relatable and it is nice that your friend calls it a birthday month! That is truly creative I must say!
I hope that you had a happy birthday. And, quite sad that you expressed a perception that some people seem to find it difficult; to remember that special day in your yearly calendar of life.
You mentioned a heartfelt longing, for people to wish you a "happy birthday"; just those two simple words. Not much to hope for, and you certainly should not have to ask.
Best wishes, and here is a late birthday cake🎂for you.
Posted 1 Week Ago
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4 Days Ago
Thank you I actually had an amazing birthday fortunately! I am glad you really understood the meanin.. read moreThank you I actually had an amazing birthday fortunately! I am glad you really understood the meaning of this poem and thank you for the birthday cake lol
I just love this poem! I hope you had a very happy birthday! My son was born on the 22nd and unfortunately had to share it with the Holidays. I pray you will not feel left out or forgotten. This poem is certainly one to cherish and remember.
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4 Days Ago
Thank you so much! I happened to have an amazing birthday thankfully! I definitely feel your son, I .. read moreThank you so much! I happened to have an amazing birthday thankfully! I definitely feel your son, I have been given birthday gifts that were my Christmas gifts at the same time so that is pretty sad but I have got pretty much used to it.
A mutual friend of ours on here (Emmajoy) told me it was your birthday and to wish you many happy returns.....so.....
🎶 Happy birthday to you (clap clap)
Happy birthday to you (clap clap)
Happy birthday dear Efxaris...
Happy birthday to you 🎶
Hope you have a great day 😃
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Oh nice!!!! Thank you so much! I really appreciate this a lot!
OHHHHHHHHHHHHH... Happy birthday and many, many more to smile you day in and day out for evermore!
By hearts and lips there are songs to be sung..
Around this world by everyone
Because Planet Cafe has not before seen
Efxaris' precious date as the BIRTHDAY queen!