An October Wedding

I think this story is witty, poignant, and well put together. I'll only offer the advice that passive and past-tense tones are usually not used in modern creative writing, especially in such short stories- at least according to a couple of my old teacher but what do they know? creative writing is about expression and uniqueness so If those tenses are for you then go ahead and employ them, the ending is superb and I hope to see if it continues

Posted 10 Years Ago