Abandoned obtain

being abandoned never will bring me down

                        

Swathed in the shades of wondrous

The Sight of gaze, pervade the depth of heart

Stiff brawn, skin crawl from  metamorphoses

Blur , fades away and apart

Conscience mind path into reality

Ignored all  the memory

Ambulate through to  illuminate alley

Reverberate sounds of beauty

Accelerate the pace into recovery

Intensity  lifts  the foundation

Raise ,  look  ascend for new vision

Flying high by time

Strong soaring fly in the storm

against the bow of lighting thunder rhyme

more than glorious could form

Abandoned obtain Revival !

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

So good it will never bring you down, you have a strong soul, and a positive way of living life. I agree, for me personally nothing will bring me down either, I think it's the way we are raised nyong... it's a part of our culture, never to complain, and see things, in a beautiful way, and be happy what we have. I love the strength of this one. Your sweet parents would have been proud of you ;) cium dari Belanda.

- Elisa

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for your kindly review Nona, sadly both of my parent already pass away. really !ish they could read this. peluk dan cium dari Indonesia

I know, nyong, I know, I read it somewhere on here, and I had to share my compassion. It's too sad, but the same time, they live further in you, and I can tell you how wonderful they were, because of your heart and soul. ((HUGS)) you're never alone, you have family still ;)

[Edward Lancheister]

your words lifted me. i will never walk alone i have friends and the best sister in the world Nona Elisa :)

........ that truly makes me a happy Sis. :) You are strong!

[Extant]

"Stiff brawn, skin crawl from metamorphoses", I really love this line, definitely goes back to 'what doesn't kill you makes you stronger' for me. But also the transformation into someone better, who can fly above the storm. I can really relate to that. Lovely poetry.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for the kindness review :)

[Extant]

You're very welcome. *Smile*