fade away

the beauty after sadness fade away

              

Tears fell from the corner of your  eyelid

Without voice that break the silence

Such a sharp diamond that pierces my heart

Sweet precious let me comfort you with my embrace

 

Gently touch upon your  face

Sing a song,  let your sadness fly by a melody

Evaporate all the hurts from your remembrance

Staring deeply into your eyes and see all the mourn fly away

 

You smile like a flower  blossom in spring        

Like a rainbow after the rain, peace after the storm

Overflowing joy more than imagination could bring

Sparkle of the morning light form

 

The Moment when your sadness fade away

Reviews

[Kamari's]

I like this because it reminds me of a saying after a storm there is a rainbow

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Kamari for stop by and read my poem. really appreciate your review :)

[Kamari's]

You are welcome :)

[ASHIDASH]

Glad to read this poem. It carries a nice balance of emotions. Well expressed.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for your kindly review

[Blake Fodor]

Deep and thought provoking, sharing bold and awesome imagery. Wonderful poem!!

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Blake for stop by and give reiew :)

[Edward Lancheister]

Such a sweet and tender write Nyong, for the Nona, or all Nona's in general. You always merge, love with nature, in a most beautiful way. Beautiful penning... comforting also.

- Elisa

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Nona Elisa, you are very kind and have a big heart. the poem about the joy after sadness that we could do with other people that stuck between depression, brokenness, hopeless. that the main reason i write poem :) bless

You are a "helper" a good soul, a friend and a brother, I always have sensed that with you Nyong Edward. That's what matters... that's all what matters. :) have a wonderful evening... well written.

[Einstein Noodle]

such a beautiful thought and feeling expressed .. really like the line:
"Such a sharp diamond that pierces my heart"
E.

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you E, your review courage me

[Salem]

wonderfullly written thanx for sharing

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for read the poem and give a review :)

[Ashley Griffiths]

Nice words that really captured my imagination.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Ashley for stop by and give a review

[Ashira Macy]

I loved your vivid description of their smile as well as the ending line. Nice work!

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Ashira, just try to describe of what i captured with camera