Old wooden chair

place where our love carves

Old wooden chair in the park where we first met

Place we  use to share our feelings and thought

Laugh with full happiness  for every joke of words that spoken

Sadness when we so far have separately  apart gone

Anger for  simply jealousy into  principle view difference in argue

Peaceful when you lay your head upon my chest

Romantic to share our sweet kisses

Comfort  zone to  eat Chinese food  with  chopstick between fingers

Simply  old wooden chair in the park

Sacred  monument of our love that spark

Place where our memories eternally carves 

Reviews

[Shekinah2015]

Very nice! It would be great if you make the lines shorter. It would be more easy-going. Other than that, I love it. You're very skilled.

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you victoria for stop by and a kind review :)

[Josiah Morgan]

I really like this, it's real, it's accurate, it's true and it's eloquent.

[Edward Lancheister]

thanks Josiah, for kindly review :)

[Ashira Macy]

Simply old wooden chair in the park
Sacred monument of our love that spark

My favorite line. I liked this one. Very nostalgic to times gone by. Objects and places can hold so many memories for us. Well done.