Somebody answer pray

Somebody answer pray

A Poem by Edward Lancheister
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be an answer to somebody wish or prayer

"

Staring into the blue sky below the horizon

Walk the path leave  footsteps  in the sand

Close my eyes feel the warmth of  sunlight

The whisper of waves  from the ocean so delight

Although there a tear in every step that taken

Shoulder the Weight of heartache undertaken

 Keep walking,   Straight up my vision,  never let it drown

There always a preponderant hope waits

Every hope carries  a destination to be fates

The Portion to be combining for the missing piece

 

To be somebody answer pray 

© 2014 Edward Lancheister


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Another uplifting art piece. I love the message. Yes, life can hurt and it can be difficult, but when you overcome it you become that much stronger. Lovely.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you Ashira for the review. point of this point is to be somebody answer pray from experience t.. read more
I like the visual in this piece, it's very pretty and peaceful. I also love the picture you used. It does your heart good when you are an answer to someones prayer or if they are an answer to yours.

Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you for lovely review, time to be an answer . bless
~*~Peace Keeper~*~

10 Years Ago

You're welcome ^^
Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

feel free to share this poem with all your friends

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Added on July 19, 2014
Last Updated on July 19, 2014
Tags: love, broken, experience, life, lost, hopeless, mental illness, psychology, hope, faith

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Edward Lancheister
Edward Lancheister

E.L Celestial, United Kingdom



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simply person that like to write from the things i see according to my notes from travelling and research, try to convey things that capture by eyes, camera or feel by sense. for me poem is more than .. more..

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