Between Decision

take a time when it come into decision

Chasing with time that will not return

When the clockwise  start to turn

From the sunrise into sunset, sign of the nature form

Dark of the dawn and the light of the morning came

Trapped between them,

Wait for another chance, chasing another opportunity

Wisdom says “better not to waste your life away”

But temptation seems so tantalize from the eyes could see

Should I turn into negativity ? but it won’t last forever

And I don’t want to fall into another failure 

Or should I live in struggle patiently?

Without knowing how would it become

Every choice has a consequence

then Wisdom whispers softly in my ears

"My child, do not be in a hurry to take a decision, because every decision that you made will determine your future"

Reviews

[Renee]

Really like this! Especially the last sentence: "My child, do not be in a hurry to take a decision, because every decision that you made will determine your future"
You never know how choices are going to influence your future, and you really captured that well! :)

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Renee for kindness review, mean a lot to me :)

[Shekinah2015]

The last sentence sums it up so perfectly....
I loved this poem! It's beat is very musical and easy-going. Where do you get ideas to write such unique poems?

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Victoria for stop by and gve a review. the idea is from regular things in my daily life. my poem is like a camera that capture the moment

[Blake Fodor]

Extremely valuable contribution here!!

[Edward Lancheister]

thanks for the review blake

[Ashira Macy]

I think this is my favorite of yours that I have read so far. Very relatable to life and how we always want to jump right in, even though we should take a step back and examine first.

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Ashira for the review, gladly to hear that you could get the message behind the words :)

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I loved the sound of the wisdom in this poem Edward:) wonderful job:)

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Jonathan for stop by and give review :)

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Your very welcome:)

[Mitchell_gerry]

Really enjoyed reading that. Well written!

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Mitchel for the review