In The Surface

In The Surface

A Poem by Edward Lancheister
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view in the surface of the water

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Swimming in the depth through the beach

Diving much deeper and deeper

See the coral and lovely sea creature to reach

feel the warmth of the sunlight that penetrates the water

 

Air bubbles that race to the surface

like million life’s breath run to the creator

The beauty of nature created for a purpose

Capture a moment that become more and more greater

 

for a moment I was stunned at the beauty inside

Go up to the surface, feel the heaviness of the pressure

Every breath that taken, every move back to the surface

Back into where I suppose to be

 

Ran towards the beach, drove by the waves.

staring at the beautiful sea surface

saved millions of mystery and the beauty kept inside

everything is hidden in the surface of life


Like a person that's seen on the outside

they have million thoughts and secret hidden inside

you can see the calmness and feel the sweetness

without realizing what could be a beast dwell in the depths

13th July 2014

@ Edward Lancheister

© 2014 Edward Lancheister


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Wow! I really really loved this. Imagery was spot on and I could feel what you were writing. I loved: "feel the warmth of the sunlight that penetrates the water" I appreciate your analysis of the sea and all of it's wonder, because such a mysteriously beautiful place deserves much more attention through beautiful literature such as this. I love love loved it. I can't wait to read more from such a gifted writer!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

Thank you for encouraging review. Feel free to share this poem with all your friends



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'Everything is hidden in the surface of life' .. Wonderful lines throughout!

Posted 10 Years Ago


I give it a big wow just like the others, truly well done. and to be honest I was thinking this will be just a poem about nature but the way you turned it around in the last stanza was superb.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you for review my poem, gladly you could capture the message behind these imagery words
.. read more
Salem

10 Years Ago

you are welcome
wow.
This is stunning!!!
Supurb job Edward!!!!! :D
I loved the imagry. I felt like I was right there, seeing it my self.
Beautiful pen friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you Chelsea for read my poem, feel free to share with all your friends :)
Konigin

10 Years Ago

Your welcome.
I will! :)
Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you for your kindness :)
What lies beneath writ large and really well captured.

I really enjoyed this. Beccy.


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you Beccy for your review and stop by to read my poem
I love how you ended it, and relate the sea and everything in it to someone and and everything inside of them.
A lovely piece. Enjoyed the read very much. :)
-Yours Truly


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you for your kindness review, it give me courage to write much more
Very nice. If only people could see the entirety of others souls as easily as they can see natures beauty, nuances, and many mysterious facets.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

in everything always kept a mystery inside, until its reveal by time. thanks for review :)
I enjoyed the vivid world you created in this great write and last lines was a kiler! Nice to meet you my friend, I have traveled your magical country:)


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

thank you, and welcome into "E.L Celestial" hopely you could enjoy my poems :)
A. Amos

10 Years Ago

Surely will do and you're most welcome...
Man that was a wonderful poem too. It like you had hit what every human being does on the world. I feel like you capture the truth meaning behind every human.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

Indeed Elsie, we could not reveal the truth that hidden inside even closer
This is magical! Imagery created is so beautiful

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edward Lancheister

10 Years Ago

Thank you Cathy for the review :)

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Added on July 13, 2014
Last Updated on July 28, 2014
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Edward Lancheister
Edward Lancheister

E.L Celestial, United Kingdom



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simply person that like to write from the things i see according to my notes from travelling and research, try to convey things that capture by eyes, camera or feel by sense. for me poem is more than .. more..

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