Many people like this poem. People are seeking encouragement in a depressing world. I like this stanza the best:
"There’s certain to be battle, a war to be won
No day leaves time to surrender
Pain brings strength, sorrow brings love
And charity brings joy- the greatest gift ever"
Very good insight, Edward, about life's push and pull, tug of war.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thank you very much for the encouraging review, life is too short to be miss
tho i have just started to get to know you.. this is the best one of yours i have read yet (you are improving the grammar).. i love the positive thread throughout .. the foundations of faith and courage and positive thinking and experience are wonderful!... should be posted on my minds eye to read every morning ... it has put me in a better frame of mind today .. thank you for sharing :)
E.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thank you very much for the courage to write much more better
Excellent write, bro! Very encouraging point of view which bleeds through your writing in such a vibrant way, inspiring those who are greeted with it. :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Thank you for have stop by and give review. Your words encourage me to write much more better
Thank you for you poem Edward; I love poetry but I have never attempted to write any I seem to be more interested in just writing. How long did it take you to write this or any poem? I was touched by your words as I am familiar with pain, sorrow and disappointment along this journey called life. I was encouraged with your words how pain brings strength, sorrow brings love and how short life is and should not be taken for granted or wasted. Thanks again Edward. Arthur Thomas
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
such a great joy that my poem could encourage people, there so many wonderful things in life even in.. read moresuch a great joy that my poem could encourage people, there so many wonderful things in life even in the deep sorrow, every trial and tribulation will result something greater than before if we could live and learn well
indeed life is worth living with how one envision life as it is , moving time and space, events come and go, memories remind , partaking in the heart of every person who passed and contributed and it is a highly inspiring poetry piece, well written piece. Two thumbs up.
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
thank you for the review, glad you could get the message between the words
simply person that like to write from the things i see according to my notes from travelling and research, try to convey things that capture by eyes, camera or feel by sense. for me poem is more than .. more..