the scars

everybody have a scars

scars resulting from deep scratches

 formed by sharp cuts or burned object 

a mark that shapes on the surface of the skin

try to hide and make them disappear

scars  from brokenness, torture even deeply hurt 

when choice or decision that become an insult 

could be a tribe tradition culture 

or maybe just a part of life circle 

many bear the scars inside their heart

from pressure of the world seems so heavy

when it should be loved but tear apart

some have scars from betrayal society

scar doesn't mark of the weakness

Only the brave one  that bore the sign 

even has been broken so many times

or being torn away but they will rise again

Scars sign of the brave and strong person  

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

Yes, so true, everyone has scars, and they are beautiful life scratches, on skin marked...
Accept them, and make the best out of it, for life is still beautiful, That's the message I got from this.

A beautiful and helpful poem, that resonates with all of us, thank you for sharing the real thing.

- Elisa

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you sister, the struggle always make us stronger each day

Edward

So so true, we are born to fall down, and get up... all with baby-steps... and there is always light on the end of the tunnel, true survivors ;) Eli

[Edward Lancheister]

No matter the deepth of the scars, there always a time to heal again :) Edward

Very true! and that's how I think too. :)

[Judy McIntosh]

I like this poem. To accept scars as markers on our life journey. As in life, when we get scarred it is traumatic, but the memories and scars fade. At the end of our journey,they tell our story and where we have been, bravo, jude

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Jude, mark a symbol of the winner from each struggle in life

[Lyn Anderson]

Accept oneself, scars and all, for they make up the wholeness of the person underneath. Wonderfully written. Two minor corrections for you: (glass -- take off the es); next line add an S to shape

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you for the correction. need an advice to encourage between writing

[Girl With A Pen]

scars mark of the brave and strong person
The last line really hit home. Your poem made a sad situation give off the energy of pure strength! 100/100

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for the encouraging words that you give