Morning Dew

when the early moning came

hear the birds whisper in the distance

there a morning dew drops in every leaf

wipe the window with my hand that freeze

the moist of your presence awaken me

water drop one by one

sparkling like a diamond by the light of the sun

new living begin to circle

turning the page into new chapter of the undone

the wind blows so gently

see the grass move like dancing rapidly

morning dew give the glory

when the creation become a creator of earnestly 

Author's Note

enjoy the poem and feel free to give a review

Reviews

[Lady Glitter]

Yes, I did enjoy this poem, because there were so many experiences to feel in it. Dampness, breeziness, birds at a distance, sunrise and the cold windowpane. I particularly like these lines, "...hear the birds whisper in the distance there a morning dew drops in every leaf wipe the window with my hand that freeze...water drop one by one sparkling like a diamond by the light of the sun..." It is really a gentle poem but I could feel my cold hand against the window.

[Edward Lancheister]

that a splendid review, big thank for you Lady Gitter

[Edward Lancheister]

excelent review, hope the words could touch reader about morning dew . thank you Lady glitter

[jonah]

nice imagery. i feel the slow and relaxing morning in the writing. you captured it really well. the details are simple, yet they depict a real situation and emotion. great job!

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you jonah for the review. mean a lot to me :)

[Crystal Ellyson]

I really enjoy this poem. It is beautiful and the description of the morning dew is amazing!!!

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Crystal for stop by and read my poem. :)

[Einstein Noodle]

i am up quite early most every morning and i take the dog out right away .. so i am privileged to experience the morning just before dawn .. with the birds, the quiet, the moon and the dew.. your poem was easy to relate to ... and reminded me of the early morning special time
E.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Mr. E for the review and stop by to read my poem

Edward

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

I love seeing the dew drops sparkling on the grass, flowers, or other plants ^^ it is such a pretty sight. They do sparkle like diamonds and at times other colors can be seen within them.

Good job

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for stopping by and review the poem. yes its like a magic in the morning come.

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

You're welcome

[Sophy Freebirds]

So wonderfully written.. you paint a clear picture of the dawn... with birds chirping,air breezing, dew shining,hands freezing... yes morning is a beautiful part of the day when you start afresh.. Good write.

~Sophy

[Edward Lancheister]

Thank you Sophy, for have take a time to stop by and feel the moment that capture between words
read moreThank you Sophy, for have take a time to stop by and feel the moment that capture between words

Edward

[Edward Lancheister]

Very rich, Nyong, truly beautiful, I can tell you truly feel the ambience, and the little treasures of life, and you are very Zen. Those little observations, are what matter. And they make a great writer out of you. Thank you for once transporting me to Bandung :)

- Elisa

[Edward Lancheister]

gladly you could feel between words that conveys the moment in Bandung

Edward

Yes, I'm glad I read this gorgeous piece... it truly brings one there. Thank you Edward :)

[Edward Lancheister]

your welcome Nona Manise

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

Wow So beautiful and Elegant and Graceful.


Thank you for sharing this lovely poem
and thank you for your kind review and comment
you left on my page.


Loved these stanza's lines.



water drop one by one

sparkling like a diamond by the light of the sun

new living begin to circle

turning the page into new chapter of the undone



blessings. kindred poet

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for the lovely review

Edward

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

You're quite welcome. it's my Pleasure always. I love poems Of Gods Beauty it is Painted as if the wind is laughing happily and dancing like a beautiful lady You've have inspired me now I see thank you :) I have one called Lady of the Ocean it is about the ocean another of Gods Beautiful Creations and I love the Ocean She is a Beautiful peaceful Mistress. blessings. kindred poet

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a truly pretty verse, with a lovely compelling honest voice. I am so glad you tripped over my cantaloupe so I felt a need to stop by.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for have take time to stop by and read.

[Lyn Anderson]

Thank you for your lovely words. You are like a breath of fresh air.