Nona / Lady

the beauty of Nona / Lady

sweet perfume of cucumber fills the air

smooth walk of beauty in your foot steps

your presence poses a new shades

never ceased to fascinate me every day

gently touch onto your hand

feel the warm sneaking into my heart

look deep into your eyes that stand

like dive into the essence beauty that ever created

draw a brush into the sketch of canvas

lines and curve be taken to capture

dark of your hair like thousand of waves

the softness of your skin like sleep in the silky blanket

passion like flame quench my soul

bring addicted to my mind

your fidelity and goodness 

blinding my heart

more than a love could get

or the eye could catch

to beautiful to be thrown apart

save forever in my heart

like a rose  planted in the garden of my heart

a song that never stop be a rhyme

in every step that taken part

there always you inside of me

Author's Note

give me your review

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

Damn it!!! Edward I have to apologize going through your poems and you embedded music into it I would be the first to admit to love music but they are not developed at the same time as your words which having an exsistence of their own making this a difficult experience. Muted there sorted.
Your descriptions of love are intimate and subtle, respectful and nature bounded but also you let us know that they transcend and it is not just what you perceive with your eyes but also the impressions that this loving making upon you as if they were making you a better man.

Well what a decent feeling that is

Thankyou

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you Rene for the review and for the music is the taste of choice :)

[Edward Lancheister]

So smooth, so gorgeous... a true treasure to all Nona's, and within these words, they can feel true women. Very romantic, and so musical. I did adore your last stanza, it speaks volume!

I hope you never stop writing Edward!

- Elisa

[Edward Lancheister]

Lovely poem that only could feel by Nona manise, only that have a mollucas blood could feel and get the message inside

thank you Nona Manise

Edward

I feel honored to have Maluku blood... :) The music, is also, very familiar within me, and my family. Thank you for sharing your swing!

[Edward Lancheister]

if you read more slowly and remind the words that written in the poem while the eyes close. this poem and music will take you to a slow dance between the embrace of loving hands

Edward

[Lyn Anderson]

This is really beautiful, and romantic in tone. One minor thing I would change, as again, there are minor grammar errors that work in the context of the poem, but I would change "or an eyes can catch" to an eye or the eye to flow better.

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for the review and correction. thats mean a lot.

[Lyn Anderson]

No problem. I am known for my editing -- but I am gentle, I keep my claws retracted.

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Thank you for posting...:)......................

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for have read and give a review of my poem sami

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)........

[Neville]

You have a captivating style Edward, keep writing. N

[Edward Lancheister]

thank you for your review Neville

edward

[Neville]

My pleasure entirely, N