Intimate Sharing

Intimate Sharing

A Poem by papaed
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8 lines about the Distance between us

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intimate sharing, enjoyable discourse

unlikely paring, no need for recourse


I sit on your lap, and offer my love

conveyed with a tap through wires from above


The distance between us is very small

In fact it’s hardly there at all


Just place your finger on the letter ‘E’

The love that lingers is from me

© 2009 papaed


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Very nice...I enjoyed this poem; it made me ponder about your images.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Superbly done.. clever! But, nonetheless tis gently done and gives exactly the sense of union you're intending.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Tis true, a great poem links two minds instantly and sometimes forever. They are javelins of this or that, in throught the eye down the optic nerve, deeper ...

Posted 14 Years Ago


I'm going to be honest and say I didn't get this at all the first or even the second time through, but on the the third time (I'm not a quitter.) I finally got it. and I love the subtilty of this. It's a love poem meant for some one special, who reaches out through her compute to touch you. It's really pretty. It feels like a secret joke. Nice job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


So beautiful and gentle. A pleasure to read. You are a Poet.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was fanciful and sweet as well as creative. I love it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


ok, I do love couplets, no pun intended. These are sweet and as I read them, I think about my spouse....
Peace.

Posted 14 Years Ago


nicely done--read like a little romance story. tovli

Posted 14 Years Ago


pretty sweet and heartfelt poem. very cool

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 17, 2009

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papaed
papaed

Kansas City, MO



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no erudite pontifications, no complex extrapolations no intentional hurtful lies, just simple age-wise aliteration and prose, of a man who's in the throes of living day to day from his head down to.. more..

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