Grace and Trust

Grace and Trust

A Poem by papaed
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ten specific words within forty for a challenge

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Our throats grow hoarse

as we laugh and sing together.

My eyes are infected 

with liquid love for no other.

Reflections of bright memories cascade.

I watch you sleeping with tender heart.

You’ve grace and trust without question

my love.

© 2009 papaed


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You seem to conjur poetry into life! I hope the final line has been shown to the appropriate recipient!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Grace and Trust, both important componets of love. I think it's good. Nice....

Posted 14 Years Ago


nice flow; i liked the way the rhyme made it all fit toghether. tovli

Posted 14 Years Ago


In so few words. You said it all. Watching a love one sleep and peaceful. Allow us to soak their beauty into our heart. A beautiful poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

An emotional filled poem I like it
Tate

Posted 14 Years Ago


a very fine and gentle piece that moves the reader in a soft
flow through each line!

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on December 13, 2009

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papaed
papaed

Kansas City, MO



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no erudite pontifications, no complex extrapolations no intentional hurtful lies, just simple age-wise aliteration and prose, of a man who's in the throes of living day to day from his head down to.. more..

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