So I follow

I can feel the breeze
   weaving between my toes
it's hinting to me 
  that I've got somewhere to go

gently it nudges me 
     guiding me towards the sea
and I've got nowhere else I need to be 

so I follow

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I'm coming too can i can i can i Edie?
wonderful short sweet poem
I feel drawn to water so often too and you tickled my toes with this ditty

[Edie Blue Starfish]

sure, come on in! thanks for hopping by Bunny

[Jade]

this is a really good write, I enjoyed this write

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Thanks for reading this one Jade.

[gram linski]

Could be a hot summers day could be a bit more dark and morose, either way I enjoyed the flow,

[Edie Blue Starfish]

I like that you thought of it that way because it's how I intended it to be. open to interpret
read moreI like that you thought of it that way because it's how I intended it to be. open to interpret

most people choose the sunny version and I think that is nice :)

thanks for the great comment!

[Chris Shaw]

Nature speaks and you don't hesitate. You go where you are directed. Nice piece of brevity.

Chris

[Edie Blue Starfish]

thank you Chris :)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

A gentle but pehaps forlorn little ditty as the protagonist seems driven by nothing other than instinct. This may be a good or a bad thing depending upon the circumstances. Again a nice easy, flowing freeverse/with a sneaky wee rhyme.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

thank you John :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and the journey begins...

sometimes we just get that urge and must go where our whimsy summons.
j.

[Edie Blue Starfish]

Yes indeed, thx for popping in Jacob.