old man

old poem

one river

flows through me

i open the wind

trees whisper

the moon laughs

my hands

touch the sky

the children

love my eyes

Reviews

[Bacchus]

children love faces and eyes...
try to talk to one while covering yours

this is a dear poem.

[Ed Hart]

the hearts of the children, tomorrow's gift and treasure

[Coyote Poetry]

A wonderful poem my friend. We need our children to love us. Thank you Ed for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Ed Hart]

all the while we keep to the keeping on...thank you

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[. serah .]

~ a child is an adult at an early stage... and an adult is a child at a late stage... and so little boy prankster hearts and little girl prankster hearts connect in the most surreal of ways... or so i think...

[Ed Hart]

interesting slant...girl with prankster heart

[. serah .]

:)

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[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

As we grow older we find a truth of experience that kids find fascinating.

[Ed Hart]

we know a bit just in time to pass on through...

[SkinlessFrank]

i think the word "timeless" comes to mind here

[Ed Hart]

thanks...i'm getting closer to shuffling off this mortal coil...i guess that'll be timeless enough

[Terpsichore]

I never saw an old man when my grandfather came to visit; just the love and kindness in his eyes. You have an uncanny knack of hitting the nail perfectly on the head.

T

[Ed Hart]

thanks Mr T...i have a grandbaby looks at me, and i can see he's wondering what i am

[W.k.kortas]

Lucky old sky, lucky children.

[Ed Hart]

thanks Mr K, puts me in mind of that lucky old sun

[jacob erin-cilberto]

they love your eyes because they can see and feel the wisdom in them.

i want to feel that river as i gather age.

j.

[Ed Hart]

i don't thing we're allowed to comment when someone tosses the word 'wisdom' in our direction, except to say thank you, j

[Corset]

you know Mr Hart, those are some fine strong hands in which to play a bongo with, especially for a birthday boy ; tomorrow, may your day be blessed with all those children who love your eyes, whatever their age may be.

[Ed Hart]

i 'bout cut my thumb off on my tablesaw yesterday...a very important bongo finger...thank you, m'lady

[Corset]

Oh Noes! Can't have that!