vision

radiance

in the sway of words

falling from bright wings

music and dance

in the play of leaves

across a sky of climbing blue

the glory of sweet life

echoing ave maria

from canyon walls

and you

standing in the summer sun

within my portion of forever

Reviews

[patricia]

that third stanza catches the eye of the storm and I was going to comment on its beauty when your last stanza blew it and me away

[Ed Hart]

hello patricia, i like to see those who see so well just a little daunted

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wonderful love poem...i wish i had written your last line...splendid...the climbing blue of love----the gray recedes...and the sweet life commences...

j.

[Ed Hart]

thank you for your appreciative words jacob

[SkinlessFrank]

were you in touch with the fires of creation when you wrote those last few lines?

[Ed Hart]

snow canyon utah, some moments are larger than others, some are hotter, some burn...thank you

[W.k.kortas]

As the wise emmajoy has noted, a love song indeed, for what more could any man desire than that which you've so elegantly expressed in the final stanza?

[Ed Hart]

it is often an aftershock to see what finds its way onto the page...i don't see how any of us can take credit for the single best voice in us...thank you mr K

[emmajoy]

And that is Love.. clothed in the warmest garments

[Ed Hart]

when it finally settles, its somehow more than everything that went before...thank you emma

[emmajoy]

How true, how very true. You're more than welcome, Sir Hart.

[Emily B]

what a lovely warm thought for a cold winter's day

[Ed Hart]

spring is coming, spring is coming...message brought to you by chicken little...hi Emily

[Emily B]

Spring Is coming :)

[. serah .]

-- a declaration for the poet, an aspiration for the reader... and i can never forget "my portion of forever"...

[Ed Hart]

a heart song, thank you my dear...the creation comes not only in moments, but in portions...who'd of thought

[. serah .]

-- ah, yes... moments and portions... amazing...

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is amazing my friend.
"the glory of sweet life
echoing ave maria
from canyon walls"
I liked the above lines. This is quite the feeling to know. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Ed Hart]

thank you, my long time friend

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome. Always a pleasure to read your words.