Swilring Sands of Redundancy

seconds turns to minutes

minutes turns to hours

hours turn to days

days turn to weeks

weeks turn to months

months turn to years

years turns to centuries

centuries turn to decades

decades turn to dust

Reviews

[Sean M. Addams]

i thought you did great on this piece.. a very creative write..nice job!!

[The Last Poetic King]

I enjoyed this, pretty much saying how time flies. It surely does, it's like yesterday we were children. Now we've grown older.

[QuietPoet]

Very true and creative. I liked it.

[HermitsUnited]

"What goes around comes around." "What comes up must come down."
I like it alot! It's so true!

[Tracie Skarbo]

and round and round it goes...nice!

Well. This is a perfect sonnet about how really what we do in the world is all relative. I absolutely, positively, love it. It's really sort of amazing. Nice job, as always. :)