Loss of Interest?

all that is fair
that is good
that is fun

all of them vanish
yes all
one
by
one

I leave you with a question
not a statement
yet a rhyme

"If I was to vanish, would it really be a crime?"

Author's Note

Seeing that people have lost interest in my work, I guess I'll take my feelings elsewhere...

Reviews

[Flo]

I dont wish you to go, I havent lost interest in your poems, but, i have so many requests to be read by me, but im to blame for not spotting you out.

yes, you vanishing would be a crime, for us to be forbidden to see your work.

generally, that poem woke me -or every one- up.

-flo

[Ian Duncan Arbogast]

I apologize for being depressed that day, but I'm keeping this up because it IS a poem.

[QuietPoet]

Don't leave here. People get busy and can't read work. I have so many read requests, its not even funny. But I hope you stay. Even if no one reads your work, your still a great writer. Keep posting and writing my friend.

[Tracie Skarbo]

oh I wish you wouldn't do that ... it seems as though you have lots to say...nicely done!

[Sean M. Addams]

a very well expressed piece... this place does have its up and downs in reviews but has some good things to offer too..hope you stick around.. best thing to do is send out request that is the best way that i get my work read...