Rhyme

I'm on a roll haha

Creeping amongst the patrons

it has its place in our minds

how we define

a good time

without a single dime

how sublime

how i rhyme

every time

the same chime

never ever mistime 

my favorite rhyme

I'm in my prime

It ain't a crime

to be a onetime 

mime

in the meantime

I'm

ruining my lifetime

just trying to define

rhyme

Reviews

I really like this one. I think that the rhymes are pretty good, and also make enough sense. It seems pretty whimsical, which makes the reader want to keep on reading and see where it ends.

[Ian Duncan Arbogast]

Thank you to all who gave their feedback. Just as a sidenote, this is the poem that set my rhyme record so I take great accomplishment in doing so ^_^

[Sean M. Addams]

very interesting piece ..flow was good in this... overall nice job..

[Dia-EchoingWind]

I liked this piece- It flowed with your chosen word choice.Great job!!!