Women

This is a poem I submitted for a grade(it got an A+) in Language Arts so I hope you enjoy.

The blissful aroma of a woman

'Tis a sensation thou cannot bypass

Oh the posture and grace of a woman

Luminescent glow as if she was glass

Phenomenal looks just like a goddess

Caught in a daze if you could see one walk

Stronger than men but weaker than Isis

'Tis very beautiful to see one talk

Dazzling hair merely enhances thy face

The eyes that sparkle the brightest of blues

Delicately entwined as if was lace

The ocean that holds the simplest of clues

A smile upon thy face brings one to mine

Necklaces, earrings, and beauty divine

 

Author's Note

This IS how I feel.

Reviews

[Freedom]

I'm taken aback. Truly. It's so rare to come across a perspective on feminine beauty that is so delicate and admiring, but that doesn't cross the line between love and obsession. This is beautiful, your whole perspective is so very beautiful. Keep writing, this is a great subject for you. Thank you for sharing.

[Ian Duncan Arbogast]

A rare yet rewarding trait indeed...

[Mary]

very nice, good to see you respect women:) That is rare...great write!!!!!!

[Hannah Monttkomepy]

That was beautiful. Usually when I see a poem named Women I'd think it'd be about insulting women but something told me I should read this so I did and I loved it.

[Twichi ^.^]

honestly though this is a verry swet poem not all girls r as good as u believe... most r quite evil actually... kinda pisses me off...thats y i don't befriend most girls guys r much less drama than girls

[Sseoni]

Whoa! That was one of the most beautiful and unique poems that I have ever read! The way you described everthing was wonderful and amazing. Just... wow. Good to hear that you got an A on it! Yay for you! Fantastic poem! :D

[Tracie Skarbo]

Another great poem Ian. My favorite line was:

Luminescent glow as if she was glass

Suggests such delicacy.

Tigra