Love As Bright As sunshine : Rictameter.

Freeverse:A love as bright as sunshine.

 

 

 

 

 

 

A very first kiss

A little unsure but passionate and wondrous

Warmth flowing from each Sunshine's magical ray.

Those of yesteryear each one

so bleak

so cold

simply cast away into the oblivion of yesteryear.

A yearning

so grown

so sure

So wondrous.

Pick up

and gently blow

away those bright shining treasures!!
A whisper in each ear

"Gently blow away yesterday's dust

slowly but surely

Hearts will awaken

and learn to trust

to love

to cherish!!

Our still full of

bright

hopeful

gems!!!

Filled with life's nectar

seeped in

life's golden

treasures

and gently composed as true love songs.

Rough grey paths

become laden with pink blossom petals.

Dark skies become

a blur

a background

so wondrously

awesome ;

a heart full of love and devotion.

Gloomy scenes

evolve into

proud masterpieces

enchanted by

today's

unconditional

love.

A love as bright

as sunshine!!!

Reviews

[M.K. Jawdat]

Very well written. Liked it the way you wrote it in brief lines

[Rogue]

I really liked this piece. You did a great job from the construction to the words. It sort of drips slowly down the page as one thought flows to the next.

Wonderful. :)

[Eddy Jones]

Thank you so very much Rogue;your comment greatly appreciated.