"A Thoughtful Destination"

"A Thoughtful Destination"

A Poem by Eddie Cruz


What i see when I look into your eyes is indescribable
So captivating and admirable everything becomes timeless
Your personality is like the journey and your mind the destination
the beauty of your beauty is more than you being beautiful
As the journey embarks I find it suitable to rest in your sweet voice
No rush at arriving as there are sights to see
Your eyes fuel me with nutrition and what my body needs
And that smile.. Oh that smile!
sends my heart on the Tour de' France
Racing cuz the start of love found it's habitat in my mind
A feeling I'd wish we both can invest in and unwind
If I had to put a price on you it'll be less
But..Only so that I can afford you. Cuz I have to have you
Not for the possession but for the appreciation
Your smile alone can heal the depressed in time of need
A woman like you is in a recession and so rare to find.
When asked what is beauty I think of what's inside
A pretty face does not make a pretty soul
But yours is gorgeous beyond measure of range
Excuse me, as I pay this toll in exchange to pass
And continue on to the destination of your mind
Cuz the thought of being in your thoughts
Is something I could only hope for.


© 2013 Eddie Cruz


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Added on December 21, 2013
Last Updated on December 21, 2013
Tags: Love, description, journey, thoughts, loving, feeling, felt

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Eddie Cruz
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"Set aside the differences when you take away color" ~EddieCruz Thinker Dreamer A writer that reads with thoughts that bleed. I like to promote a positive mind and change. Love and Hate are bo.. more..

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