"Consequential Emotion"

"Consequential Emotion"

A Poem by Eddie Cruz
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A spoke word piece. A bit tough to read but hopefully the message follows through. Thank you to all for the review. Share if you'd like. Comment any feedback. My first time doing this.

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You see Anger begins with sin that we all hold within. Emotions with a grin pins losses never wins. Concealing within bins what we hold up and in. What i lend is in our minds within self binding tins. Only letting out what we perceive as necessary.. Its secondary to make us weary and scary. Cuz at that moment it's nearing what we feel our heart is hearing. Something we'll never feel once our mind starts clearing. It's a destruction brought from the construction of angry combustion. It's nothing like production instead it's a product of self seduction, loving nothing but the corruption and deduction of a sane function so Anger is what we release as our emotion Floating like an ocean never coming only going; Heat in our blood flowing ironically cools without knowing. Its like mending together without sewing in the state where love is not showing. Only lowering never growing, kept in then finally blowing..See It's never sense full just suspenseful as our actions are so dense full, but try picking up a paper and releasing with a pencil... Listen I'm not speaking with a piece of mind that is hypocritical. I'm just teaching with a piece of mine that experienced the critical. It's the principal of constructive criticism that tears us away from destructive mannerism. Self vandalism on I like astigmatism causing cries with Verbalism so why must we give in with lies. Convincing ourselves we should when we really shouldn't showing what it could while others say we couldn't. Our lives dead in the middle of little riddles we use literal pinnacles pointing back at our mental about to turn physical...into regret not a movie set or a test no insecurities at rest making us do more when we should be doing less. What I just described is nothing that is prescribed or taken away with a bribe. It lies within us all, anywhere from the city to a tribe. Just a bad vibe shaking up without surprise so find a way out before yourself is who you'll despise. Love yourself and it'll rub off to others next is sisters and brothers then your significant others... If we all learn that anger managed causes no damage won't mind the challenge but the adage can be like a fresh canvas. Loving yourself is a gain, once attained it is like being in a paradise even though you're surrounded by rain.......
So love yourself, respect yourself and it'll guide your life in a way Anger never will.
~EddieCruz

© 2013 Eddie Cruz


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Eddie Cruz
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"Set aside the differences when you take away color" ~EddieCruz Thinker Dreamer A writer that reads with thoughts that bleed. I like to promote a positive mind and change. Love and Hate are bo.. more..

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