You...

You...

A Poem by ecto521

I look into your eyes,
and see a world that's new to me.
It comes as a surprise,
That I can stare so easily.
You say what's on your mind,
and it all sounds so beautiful.
Our words become entwined,
in conversation that's colourful.
You're passionate and true,
and ambitious to the end.
I'm just too scared to tell you,
I want to be more than just your friend.
So...
I'll be the friend you need,
even though I feel my heart bleed,
It's love for you.

© 2011 ecto521


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I love it! It's such a new romantic side of your writing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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It's absolutely perfect up until "I'm scared to tell you". After that it just needs some refining. Fabulous poem, thank you.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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ecto521
ecto521

Plymouth, Devon, United Kingdom



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For a hopeful writer I have very little to write about me. I'm like a book, but you learn nothing from the blank pages inside. You have to spend time with me and write down what you learn along the wa.. more..

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A Poem by ecto521