Exit stage right...

Exit stage right...

A Poem by ecto521

I try to act normal and put on a front
But the resulting emotion portrays me a c**t.

I've laughed and I've cried but I emote no more
Take thee thy pills and open the door.

© 2011 ecto521


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Brilliant... I can relate to this one in so many ways. I would normally be careful when using the word C**t in poetry as it can be very offensive to lots of people, however on this occasion you have used it wonderfully.
'Take thee thy' - genius use of olde language and illiteration.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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I really like this, its cute! I imagine a modern Shakespeare's saying this, with jeans and t- shirt.. my mind is weird so forgive me...LOL

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Brilliant... I can relate to this one in so many ways. I would normally be careful when using the word C**t in poetry as it can be very offensive to lots of people, however on this occasion you have used it wonderfully.
'Take thee thy' - genius use of olde language and illiteration.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

We'll have you a poet yet little brother

Posted 13 Years Ago


Nice! A clever little piece. A strong picture you paint with your pencil. It rhymes well, flows, very nice :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 22, 2011
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ecto521
ecto521

Plymouth, Devon, United Kingdom



About
For a hopeful writer I have very little to write about me. I'm like a book, but you learn nothing from the blank pages inside. You have to spend time with me and write down what you learn along the wa.. more..

Writing
Cascading. Cascading.

A Poem by ecto521