In This Dreamish Age

Let me be your solitary ocean

Swallowing you inside my waves

Carrying you endlessly in my currents

Where all becomes passion’s peace

In this dreamish Age of Pisces

In this wilding Age of Aquarius

We remember the flight of Aphrodite

Memorialize the rescue of Eros

Bound together in their hiding

Safe in your mysterious waters

Waters flowing in jade and aquamarine

Divine breath whispers over me

In the echoes of our halcyon seas

And I clothe you in sacred fabric

Only the clothing of a goddess

For you are heaven's poem now alive

That I will read into deep forevers

You are my soul's song so sublime

In ripples and rhythm on every wave

Come, come rest in my currents

Let me carry you day and night

And wash rich ecstasy over you

So that all you will ever remember

Is joy in your beautiful blood

Only serenity flooding your mind

Author's Note

“In one drop of water are found all the secrets of all the oceans; in one aspect of You are found all the aspects of existence.”
― Kahlil Gibran

Reviews

[Zami Amma]

You have so much beautiful mysticism here, this takes her to a dream world where only her and her sacred lover exists. :)
Your words are pure bliss, your style so original, there's no one on this planet like you. Please continue speaking life to my soul. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you for your divine comments. :) I read your words and know you understand, you know there is the world we see and this deeper world around us, the mystical places that hide from so many eyes. Here is where the dream world of bliss awakens, and will lead you to pathways of paradise. xo

[Writing Angel]

Beautiful blood speaks loud to me ... amazing work with beautiful imagery .. your muse for your work must be impressing

[Echoes of Eros]

I so deeply appreciate your words, and your precious time to take in my thoughts. xo

[Writing Angel]

They are all well worth it

[V]

Regarding the title, it reads like a dedication to youth but it's more like an offering now after I read. It's woven pretty nicely, with all those lovely and rich images of the ocean and shades of blue.

Definitely your divine style again.

I love your quote btw.

[Echoes of Eros]

I am so thankful to have your presence here again, precious poet. May your world be filled with everything beautiful, and peace everlasting. xo

[V]

I've been here all the time, only a tad more silent.. I still don't review much, only stick to random convos, they're a nice distraction. You're welcome.

[Echoes of Eros]

Let your soul find all you need to soar again, in stillness, in silence, and sweet convos. Want you smiling again. xo

[V]

Thank you. I try to be a little more light-hearted..

[AYVID N]

The vastness and richness of the oceans is so akin to love. And to love is to take a leap of faith, in free fall, trusting the ocean. Your inspiring poetry is a thing of beauty and joy.

[Echoes of Eros]

Truly even the shadow of your presence is light. May you find yourself only becoming more of the sea each day, dear Divya.

[AYVID N]

Thank you dear Eros...

[Elizabeth J. Gelinger]

I always enjoy the mythological references you use on your poems. And the words you choose to describe a scenario or a person are always beyond ordinary and that gives your poetry a sublime tone. Your texts make me wanna write more and I really appreciate them for that. Keep up the amazing work.

[Echoes of Eros]

There could be no sweeter praise than my words awakening your heart to inspirations. Thank you, dear Elisabeth. May you dream in every color of life. xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

Such passion within these lines...oh, how you stir my imagination! Perhaps my muse will take flight yet!

[Echoes of Eros]

Dear Kelly, I appreciate you so much. May your imaginations always be stirred to pure fire. xo

[Ruth]

Your words always stir deeply, 'tis a magical journey and experience reading you :) Gentle and appreciative, loving and calm...beautiful combination that made the soul sigh and the heart smile :)

[Echoes of Eros]

It is always bliss to see you've been by, sweet poet. Giving such everlasting thanks. xo

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful words written dear Poet.
"For you are heaven's poem now alive
That I will read into deep forevers
You are my soul's song so sublime
In ripples and rhythm on every wave"
The above lines. Perfect and needed. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Echoes of Eros]

So glad to have you at the cafe, Coyote. You lift us all.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are very kind and you are welcome.

[Haley Harrigan]

Beautiful poem! I enjoyed it very much! Blessed Be!

[Echoes of Eros]

Blessings to you, Haley! I appreciate your soul's presence here. xo

[Haley Harrigan]

Thank you!

[emmajoy]

Why haven't more people reviewed this?!

What a wonderful dream-stance piece this is. Phrase by phrase you've woven past influences and depths to describe your emotions; they're enfolded by the heavens, the ancients and gods, the beauty about. Seems you've used every moment of the past's influences to magnify your love. Or, perhaps, adoration - yes, adoration, because that's what and how it is.

More than beautiful:

'For you are heaven's poem now alive
That I will read into deep forevers
You are my soul's song so sublime
In ripples and rhythm on every wave.. '

[Echoes of Eros]

Your post gave me much Monday happiness, emmajoy. Thank you for elevating my words into these sacred, heavenly places. My muse is truly a divine light to me, arousing worlds of bliss. May your skies always shower you with such blessings and seeds of joy. xo