Her soul was every color

On dreamscapes of surreal refrains xo

Her soul was every color of rain

rippled canvas of fire in chains

on dreamscapes of surreal refrains

kissed jade and azure sighs

reflected sonnets in her eyes

in darkened sweet mystery

sipping of her saturnine sea

talisman in van Gogh’s flight

across the ancient stars of night

like sweet fragrance after rain

lingering echoes of clouded pain

on dreamscapes of surreal refrains

Reviews

[ReedWrite]

I am a right-brained person that thinks more like a shotgun blast than the straight line fire of a rifle. I need sensory stimulation...textures, depth, sound, visual images. When I read a poem, I want to 'FEEL' it. I want it to seep through me, speaking its words on a level deeper than thought and processing allows. As a musician, I also love a poem that takes on a musical lilt and flow Your poem did that...all of that. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

[Echoes of Eros]

Your words are so divinely lifting. Thank you so much. Somehow I almost missed your light on my page. xo

[Iris]

Loved it. Seems like you channelled your inner Shakespeare. The romanticism comes through extremely well, although I did not understand what you meant by 'talisman in van Gogh's flight'.
Other than that, the poem has an ancient, literary feel to it. It stirs one's creative fibers a little bit.
Thank you for the write.

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you precious Iris. I definitely love Shakespeare. Some of the lines are fragments of my desires. Van Gogh's imagery always sets me on fire; the colors and movement. xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

You have a tendency of sweeping THIS reader off her feet...all I need is moonlight!

[Echoes of Eros]

Dearest Kelly, may you have your effervescent wish of sweet moonlight to caress you into the sacred sighs of night. xo

[Ruth]

So, so very beautiful...reading you is a breath of fresh, untainted air...sigh...amazing...truly...words are minimal when I read such depth only because I am deeply moved :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Poppy, how you always leave traces of light wherever you walk. Thank you for lighting my dark world again. xo

[Ruth]

My absolute pleasure hon, truly :)

[K.M]

I love love love love this! great job!- Kenzie

[Echoes of Eros]

Dear Kenzie! Thank you so so so so much! xo

[Emily]

I loved very word!!!
Keep up the great work!

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you, Emily. Your words lift my soul. xo