Her soul was every color

On dreamscapes of surreal refrains xo

Her soul was every color of rain

rippled canvas of fire in chains

on dreamscapes of surreal refrains

kissed jade and azure sighs

reflected sonnets in her eyes

in darkened sweet mystery

sipping of her saturnine sea

talisman in van Gogh’s flight

across the ancient stars of night

like sweet fragrance after rain

lingering echoes of clouded pain

on dreamscapes of surreal refrains

Reviews

[ReedWrite]

I am a right-brained person that thinks more like a shotgun blast than the straight line fire of a rifle. I need sensory stimulation...textures, depth, sound, visual images. When I read a poem, I want to 'FEEL' it. I want it to seep through me, speaking its words on a level deeper than thought and processing allows. As a musician, I also love a poem that takes on a musical lilt and flow Your poem did that...all of that. Thank you so much for sharing it with us.

[Echoes of Eros]

Your words are so divinely lifting. Thank you so much. Somehow I almost missed your light on my page. xo

[Girl With A Pen]

I love this read. It is so deep and thoughtful. Your writing is like a dream. Beautiful! Thank you for sharing

[Echoes of Eros]

Your descriptions and insights made me smile. Deeply appreciated! xo

[micky]

This is so amazing I loved every word this poem took me somewhere so bautiful thank you my dear friend ....

[Echoes of Eros]

May you find your way to beautiful places all year. xo

[The dark story]

Vivid imagery painted by your words flowing like a mellifluous cascade through the veins as lips phrase out them. It's a breath-taking write which takes me to a dreamscape,where you are the Artist , the wordsmith of that world. Splendid! Thanks for sharing.

[Echoes of Eros]

Dear Atiba, I treasure your kindness, and wish you a new year full of light and life in abundance for you. xo

[The dark story]

Wish you a very Happy new year. 😊

[softlyfall]

3-2-2-2-3, a songlike form.. several excellent allusions and image phrasing is very beautiful- particularly fire in chains. Some are a little more commonplace but work well.
Talisman in Van Gogh's flight is interesting. Would you please tell me what that means to you?
I also very much enjoyed your ue of assonance.

[Echoes of Eros]

I am so deeply thankful for your insightful thoughts, and your interest in the soul of my words. The "talisman in van Gogh’s flight, across the ancient stars of night" relates to one of my favorite paintings, The Starry Night, and the magic it holds, a magic that is related to in a Doctor Who episode: Vincent and the Doctor. It does amaze me that we gaze up at the stars as he did so long ago, and I can share them with my twin flame. xo

[softlyfall]

Yes, and you and you twin flame may have done before, so many times, under that same star.

[Aphy!]

Beautiful image. Lovely rhyme scheme. Absolutely gorgeous poem. Love your usage of words (grammar)
Flows perfectly and portrayed beautifully
Aphy

[Echoes of Eros]

Aphy, it is a joy to have your words grace my page. xo

[Philip Muls]

Like sweet fragrance after rain. We all recognize that sense.

You are a master of words, you make powerful combinations.

[Echoes of Eros]

Philip, I am so grateful for your encouragement, in your words and presence.

[FateDictates]

instant imagery holds one hostage, and happily so with your words...

[Echoes of Eros]

It is a sweet pleasure to have you read these words of my soul. Thank you. xo

[AYVID N]

Breathtaking poetry...The imagery, the rhyming...it's all so captivating. I like how you repeat the 'catchline'...It adds tons to the beauty of the poem. Appreciated so much...🌷

[Echoes of Eros]

My soul is lifted by your very presence, DIVYA. Whispering blessings of bliss over your night. xo

[AYVID N]

Thank you so much for your enchanting wishes...