In Indigo Imaginations

How she was threaded with magical cords... xo

How she was threaded with magical cords

woven with illuminating tapestries of light

even her tears were cleansed in liquid life

 

Each sigh within has become a sacred prayer

through the earth of her awakens a divine echo

life rising from the dust, forever transformed

 

May she come to the misted madness of me

until my skin is earth and my soul is sky

and every breath becomes a winded fury

 

Would that I could become the sun and every shadow

so that I would be endlessly caressing her soft skin

Touching her to know the burning of a thousand stars

 

For in the ripples of her reflection one can see eternity

so sweetly she came into the cold, aching pieces of me

and in her warm fragrance I forgot what winter was

 

There forever I wish to lie in her indigo imaginations

as she perceived the world in her endless colors

and everything came alive on her living canvas.

Reviews

[Zami Amma]

I love flowing in the currents that are your words.
"For in the ripple of her reflectiom one can see eternity."
I see a lot of depth to her, you could tirelessly swim.
The imagary that you create is unlike any other, I love it. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Your vision sees so clearly what my soul speaks. There are lives that becomes oceans and they swallow us whole. These are ones we should seek out. Thank you for your sweet, sacred thoughts. xo

[Nisreen]

Absolutely stunning !!!!!!

[Echoes of Eros]

I am glad for your words! xo

[AYVID N]

Your word choice is amazing as you paint multiple hues of love on a shimmering indigo canvas. The penultimate verse is so stunningly lovely. The picture made me think of beautiful mermaids in a starlit, dark blue sea...Loved it Eros! 💕

[Echoes of Eros]

And yet, here again I find you lifting my soul to the sea and sky. May they wrap you in clouds of light and waves of wonder. xo

[AYVID N]

Thank you for your beautiful words that touch my soul...

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

For in the ripples of her reflection one can see eternity
so sweetly she came into the cold, aching pieces of me
and in her warm fragrance I forgot what winter was


Dude! Let me lay aside my gilded words and just say .... wow, i am speechless at this one. Raw and refined all at once with moments of transcendence and wonder ... i ( going full white girl here) CANT EVEN

[Echoes of Eros]

Sweet soul, thank you for your absolute extravagance of words and thoughts. Made my day! Appreciate you so much. xo

[christopher1111]

o what a muse she must be, Echoes of Eros, this poem captured my senses, very organic.... a beautiful love poem that transports....a happy healthy baby surrounded by love and protection, great use of water...this is inspiring, enjoyed....I like the way you write poetry....peace

[Echoes of Eros]

Thanks so much for your kind words, and for seeing my muse through them. xo

[Nina]

Great, as always. Your word choice is amazing and the feelings tou get when reading this are very overwhelming.

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you precious Nina. Your words and presence are pure light. xo

[softlyfall]

Lovely alliteration and implied analogy in this, very sensual ad erotic, yet transcendent as well.

[Echoes of Eros]

You understand so well. Deeply appreciate your comments. Am only just learning to see beyond my eyes. xo

[softlyfall]

I am so happy you featured this one. Such a pleasure to read it again.
As always, this third reading revelaed even more to me. The wonderful Gaia/twin flame analogy is breathtaking.

[Echoes of Eros]

I am so thankful you saw this flowing in the words and felt her sacred soul there too. She is in silence for now, but I know there is no distance with twin flames. xo

[Ruth]

You write with such elegance and sheer grace...I imagine each of your poems so carefully thought through and woven...just magickal...with an intentional k :)

[Echoes of Eros]

How your presence seems to transform mere words into elements of light, so may I come to learn from your magick, sweet poet. Thank you for always showing me kindness across endless ages. xo

[Emily]

Love the story it tells!!
Keep up the great work!

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you so much, Emily! Your heart always lifts. xo