In our endless, ageless loving

In our endless, ageless loving

A Poem by Echoes of Eros
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We become every hue and color of light

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In our endless, ageless loving

we become every hue and color of light

and even night holds the music of our burning

for our souls were woven in vibrations

in the music of the universe

and there we dance

there we become the earth and sky

forever in this love

to be in the midst of all madness

all wild distractions

and yet only see your lover's face

only hear your lover's voice

for love isn't just a word

it is a world

a key to secret doors

to sublime places of mystery

and that is what a kiss is

it leads you deeper into the mystic places of the soul

you came and I forgot what winter was…


© 2016 Echoes of Eros


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"you came and I forgot what winter was…"

Speechless! The end just left me awed and out-of-words. Every word speaks volume.

"there we become the earth and sky
forever in this love"
An outstanding comparison. Only yesterday I came across one of Donne's quote : Art is the most passionate orgy within man's grasp.
Your verses just nails it.
Thank you so much for sharing your magnificent works. Looking forward to more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Echoes of Eros

7 Years Ago

And I am without the right words to thank you for your visions shared on my page, this sacred quote,.. read more



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This quite took my breath away. You've written something beyond extraordinary here, something that encompassed the heart and soul of this reader. You are amazing, my friend!

"You came and I forgot what winter was..."
What a profound closing line...indeed, perfection!


Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

It is ecstasy when you encounter a soul that can transform the world just by being. I know you must .. read more
Kelly Scheppers

8 Years Ago

...thank you! Your words are most endearing!
Erotic, sensuous, intelligent, and vibrant. As far as I am concerned, this is perfect.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

Your presence always lifts the soul, sweet poet. Perhaps she is perfect, and my words merely echo he.. read more
Artwork and words. Amazing. The good good description led reader to good places and visions. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

I thank you so much. So hope your day is filled with all you desire.
Coyote Poetry

8 Years Ago

You are welcome. Have fun and be safe.

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