In our endless, ageless loving

In our endless, ageless loving

we become every hue and color of light

and even night holds the music of our burning

for our souls were woven in vibrations

in the music of the universe

and there we dance

there we become the earth and sky

forever in this love

to be in the midst of all madness

all wild distractions

and yet only see your lover's face

only hear your lover's voice

for love isn't just a word

it is a world

a key to secret doors

to sublime places of mystery

and that is what a kiss is

it leads you deeper into the mystic places of the soul

you came and I forgot what winter was…

Reviews

[The dark story]

"you came and I forgot what winter was…"

Speechless! The end just left me awed and out-of-words. Every word speaks volume.

"there we become the earth and sky
forever in this love"
An outstanding comparison. Only yesterday I came across one of Donne's quote : Art is the most passionate orgy within man's grasp.
Your verses just nails it.
Thank you so much for sharing your magnificent works. Looking forward to more.

[Echoes of Eros]

And I am without the right words to thank you for your visions shared on my page, this sacred quote, and now a desire to have such glorious Art fill you to overflowing all year. xo

[Kesha]

Wow, this reminded me of an old timey movie. So elegant, I loved the way this painted two lovers dancing in my head. The picture definitely fits your poem. Nicely done

[Echoes of Eros]

I am thankful you saw the bit of elegance I hoped might rise in this dance of words. May this new week find you dancing as well. xo

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

The last half of your poem:
"for love isn't just a word

it is a world

a key to secret doors

to sublime places of mystery

and that is what a kiss is

it leads you deeper into the mystic places of the soul

you came and I forgot what winter was…"

Wow, this is exactly what love is. You are so wise, my friend!

[Echoes of Eros]

Dear Nadia, it is a divine blessing to have your presence here. Whispering New Year's joy to you and your precious ones. xo

[micky]

Such loving words old friend,u bring me to a room filled with silks and loving whispers out looking a magical forest filled with love and peace much like ur words.

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you so much, dear friend. Wishing you such love and peace over your new week. xo

[Jess]

Excellent descriptions!
It was beautiful.

''forever in this love
to be in the midst of all madness
all wild distractions'' - this one was amazing. and wild ;p ;p

[Writing Angel]

be as it may.. this was different..special
i only feel envy for the inspiration...
great work once again..breathless.. and deep in thought

[Echoes of Eros]

There is a place like this for every soul who seeks it. Thank you for your beautiful presence here. xo

[Writing Angel]

thats the thing..by reading this..i dont have to seek when its clearly in front of me

[Ayvid N]

I loved it, just loved it. A perfect tribute to love. You know this emotion inside out and you capture it's essence to the hilt. May you never run out of such divine inspiration! Keep shining always Eros.

[Echoes of Eros]

You breathe light into me, dear poet. I have lived so long in midnight places, sensing that dawn is near now, and dawn is the divine sunfire of Love's everlasting light. Feel it in every breath you take, especially on days that seem so ordinary. xo

[Ayvid N]

Yes I willcfeel the love.You are such an inspiration .

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

You came and I forgot what winter was
Wow man!
This is elegant and classic. Really love the sense of direction and flawlessness of its flow

[Echoes of Eros]

Crystal, it is so good to see you by. I appreciate your sweet glimpse at my words. xo

[Ruth]

This really shimmers...the flow is superb and wonderfully poised just right...you write with a sheer beauty :)

[Echoes of Eros]

I appreciate your kindness so much, dear Poppy. I have many scars, and only Love has ever found a way to heal them. xo

[Ruth]

Love is a healer in true form...most welcome, my pleasure :)

[Diamond Dunbar]

Man reading this I felt a love story of mine replay and it danced on my mind as the words ran off my lips

[Echoes of Eros]

Ah, that brings me pure joy knowing that my thoughts might take you to such a place of dancing... of freedom. Thank you, sweet poet. xo