In our endless, ageless loving

In our endless, ageless loving

A Poem by Echoes of Eros
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We become every hue and color of light

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In our endless, ageless loving

we become every hue and color of light

and even night holds the music of our burning

for our souls were woven in vibrations

in the music of the universe

and there we dance

there we become the earth and sky

forever in this love

to be in the midst of all madness

all wild distractions

and yet only see your lover's face

only hear your lover's voice

for love isn't just a word

it is a world

a key to secret doors

to sublime places of mystery

and that is what a kiss is

it leads you deeper into the mystic places of the soul

you came and I forgot what winter was…


© 2016 Echoes of Eros


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"you came and I forgot what winter was…"

Speechless! The end just left me awed and out-of-words. Every word speaks volume.

"there we become the earth and sky
forever in this love"
An outstanding comparison. Only yesterday I came across one of Donne's quote : Art is the most passionate orgy within man's grasp.
Your verses just nails it.
Thank you so much for sharing your magnificent works. Looking forward to more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Echoes of Eros

7 Years Ago

And I am without the right words to thank you for your visions shared on my page, this sacred quote,.. read more



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Wow, this reminded me of an old timey movie. So elegant, I loved the way this painted two lovers dancing in my head. The picture definitely fits your poem. Nicely done

Posted 7 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

7 Years Ago

I am thankful you saw the bit of elegance I hoped might rise in this dance of words. May this new we.. read more
"you came and I forgot what winter was…"

Speechless! The end just left me awed and out-of-words. Every word speaks volume.

"there we become the earth and sky
forever in this love"
An outstanding comparison. Only yesterday I came across one of Donne's quote : Art is the most passionate orgy within man's grasp.
Your verses just nails it.
Thank you so much for sharing your magnificent works. Looking forward to more.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Echoes of Eros

7 Years Ago

And I am without the right words to thank you for your visions shared on my page, this sacred quote,.. read more
The last half of your poem:
"for love isn't just a word

it is a world

a key to secret doors

to sublime places of mystery

and that is what a kiss is

it leads you deeper into the mystic places of the soul

you came and I forgot what winter was…"

Wow, this is exactly what love is. You are so wise, my friend!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

7 Years Ago

Dear Nadia, it is a divine blessing to have your presence here. Whispering New Year's joy to you and.. read more
Such loving words old friend,u bring me to a room filled with silks and loving whispers out looking a magical forest filled with love and peace much like ur words.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

Thank you so much, dear friend. Wishing you such love and peace over your new week. xo
Excellent descriptions!
It was beautiful.

''forever in this love
to be in the midst of all madness
all wild distractions'' - this one was amazing. and wild ;p ;p

Posted 8 Years Ago


be as it may.. this was different..special
i only feel envy for the inspiration...
great work once again..breathless.. and deep in thought

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

There is a place like this for every soul who seeks it. Thank you for your beautiful presence here. .. read more
Writing Angel

8 Years Ago

thats the thing..by reading this..i dont have to seek when its clearly in front of me
I loved it, just loved it. A perfect tribute to love. You know this emotion inside out and you capture it's essence to the hilt. May you never run out of such divine inspiration! Keep shining always Eros.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

You breathe light into me, dear poet. I have lived so long in midnight places, sensing that dawn is .. read more
Ayvid N

8 Years Ago

Yes I willcfeel the love.You are such an inspiration .
You came and I forgot what winter was
Wow man!
This is elegant and classic. Really love the sense of direction and flawlessness of its flow

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

Crystal, it is so good to see you by. I appreciate your sweet glimpse at my words. xo
This really shimmers...the flow is superb and wonderfully poised just right...you write with a sheer beauty :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

I appreciate your kindness so much, dear Poppy. I have many scars, and only Love has ever found a wa.. read more
Ruth

8 Years Ago

Love is a healer in true form...most welcome, my pleasure :)
Man reading this I felt a love story of mine replay and it danced on my mind as the words ran off my lips

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

Ah, that brings me pure joy knowing that my thoughts might take you to such a place of dancing... of.. read more

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