May our heat melt all the stars

In the rivers of your ecstasy xo

The rivers of your ecstasy

wash away the dark dust of day.

How I want to taste the delicacy

of your gardens

and wander deeper

through every path of your delicious soul

until all I know

is the intoxication of your name.

For there is no wine so delicious

so intoxicating

as the taste of your soul

through those warm lips.

We are the glowing mists

soft summer sighs

the light that swallows shadows

our life unfolding in every embrace.

Do not love me like the wind

in whimpers and mindless furies.

Love me instead like the sea

vast and deep and transcendent.

May our heat melt all the stars

into one screaming flame

as we make the seasons jealous

and transform life into endless summer.

Reviews

[Kelly Scheppers]

"Love me instead like the sea
vast and deep and transcendent.
May our heat melt all the stars
into one screaming flame
as we make the seasons jealous
and transform life into endless summer."

You have just melted me down...like butter! ...did I say wow?

[Echoes of Eros]

It is always a pleasure to have your sweet words and whispers here. Thank you. xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

This is so poetic, and extremely deep.
Those are the 2 words I would use to describe this poem the most.
Very romantic, and sensual.
Wonderful write, I enjoyed reading it.
Keep on writing :)

[Echoes of Eros]

I am grateful to have you visit my world of confessions. Thank you, dear cimmy. Write on, and make the world see what it needs through the music of your voice. xo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Your welcome anytime :)
Will do :)

[Nina]

"May our heat melt all the stars
into one screaming flame
as we make the seasons jealous
and transform life into endless summer."

Someone can only hope to be able to love like this. Intense, strong, but sweet, careful... Love it.

[Echoes of Eros]

I thank you so very much, Nina. Yes, I want to find a love like this. Something wild and wonderful to wake to every morning. May your life always be embraced by love and light, dear poet. xo

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

oh damn!
Do not love me like the wind
in whimpers and mindless furies.
Love me instead like the sea
vast and deep and transcendent.

Wow. This left me grabbing for the the breath it stole away. Awesome pacing and phasing. Totally one of my favorites.

[Willard Wells]

Lovely work with great flow and content. The love comes through and it is a very gentle work. Thanks,

[Echoes of Eros]

Thank you so much, Willard. The world is so fragmented right now. Wanting Love to become its light again.

[Nourhane]

This is beautiful, a masterpiece, it made me shed a tear

[Echoes of Eros]

Nourhan, your thoughts and feelings are so appreciated here. May you always swim in rivers of ecstasy. xo

[SimplyOlivia]

Oh Eros. Your words enchant as per usual. Your words truly wrapped around me like a summer breeze and warmed me like the sun itself was licking my skin. Endless summer indeed. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Dear Olivia, your name echoes the warmth of summer's sweet season. Thank you for your light here all these months. :)