In the echoes of your sweet soul

I would write of you forever xo

If time stood still while I wrote

I would write of you forever

Just to taste the ink of your skin

To journey across the profound pages of you

In the echoes of your sweet soul’s sigh

The liquid sky looks good on you

And even your name is written like magic

The name that means Beautiful

So share your darkest pages with me

The ones that drip of sacred blackness

Let me leave traces of light on you

Until I lay in your meadow passages

Under the stars of our journal life.

Reviews

[Writing Angel]

its great as it almost persuades me to ask of your inspiration...its breathtakingly beautiful

[Echoes of Eros]

Inspiration, how it comes on the winds and stars of fire. May yours be everlasting. xo

[Writing Angel]

may the fire within your inspiration always burn deep inside your mind, love

[Nourhane]

This is art. i can't find a better way to describe that other than a perfect masterpiece, i'm literally in love with it. Chapeau!

[Echoes of Eros]

As I so love art and its visual awakening to the soul, so I appreciate your thoughts. Thank you, dear poet. xo

[J Otero]

This is amazing. I want to read it until I know it by heart. Bravo!

[Echoes of Eros]

I am so thankful for your wonderful words, and your lifting heart. xo

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

An intense piece of powerful love.
Imagery so serene, simple and touching that it takes the reader to some other realm..
Beautiful!

[Echoes of Eros]

Giving thanks that you appeared on my page and found your way into this realm of love. Thank you, sweet poet. xo

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are welcome.

[Mitali Shah]

This is simply sweet and lovely piece Eros. :)

[Echoes of Eros]

Mitali, I am grateful you enjoyed its warmth. xo

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem is beautiful.
"And even your name is written like magic
The name that means Beautiful"
Above lines are outstanding. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[Echoes of Eros]

My good friend, it is so good to log on and find your comments. Happy autumn!

[Coyote Poetry]

Happy Autumn to you and I hope all is going well for you.

[Crystal Overmeyer-Birmi..]

You know that feeling you get after you recall and good memory? That peace you feel followed usually with a touch of sadness to see it go. Thats what your words stirred in my soul. The bitter sweet happiness of reading a great book, but knowing you will never get to live that story again for the first time. This is truly remarkable. One of my favorites for sure

[Echoes of Eros]

Crystal, it's such a joy to have you reading my words. You express such a depth in your understanding of them. Wishing you a new week of pure bliss. xo

[dan]

E of E, Your writing style is part mystical, part magical and part disarmingly real...a cornucopia of heat signatures flashing across the page with great urgency, inviting the reader to bask in its vivid essence. I hope that doesn't read like bullshit because I so admire your writing style, your way with the language, the crispness and edgy folds of your thought processes coming to life on the page. I have been away from reviewing for a good while due to my wife's and my own health difficulties so I am backed up on reviews, but I ask that you please continue to send me read requests because your writing is exceptional. Thank you, and take care...dan

[Echoes of Eros]

Dear dan, how I appreciate your encouragement and light here. So hope that your precious wife is feeling better. Wanting good things for both of you. Hope to see you here soon in summer's fading light.

[dan]

My wife is better (thank you) but my problems (severe leg pain and weakness) continue, but it doesn't prevent me from reviewing. I just reviewed another of your pieces. take care...dan

[Alfred Kukitz]

you have a generosity of soul bordering on remarkable. The image and words coagulate into a symbiotic manifestation.

regards,
al

[Echoes of Eros]

This one was definitely inspired, al, and I am so grateful that you could see the oneness manifest here.

[Kelly Scheppers]

"If time stood still while I wrote
I would write of you forever
Just to taste the ink of your skin
To journey across the profound pages of you..."

I am in awe of this...how perfectly it could stand on its own merit.
What a lovely concoction you've presented to be intoxicated by!

[Echoes of Eros]

You always find a way of bringing a smile to my face. Thank you, sweet Kelly. Aren't we all somehow chapters of the same miraculous book? xo

[Kelly Scheppers]

I would agree!