Dark Paradise

Inspired by Lana Del Rey... xo

My melancholy baby

Woven siren skin of starlight

Do you dream of restless suns?

 

Lips that can kill, kill

Jasmine blue your firelight

Hues of colored rain firing guns?

 

Sing, sweet Lolita, sing

Storms unleash your tones tonight

Dark paradise seducing countless sons?

 

 

 

Author's Note

"Lick me up and take me like a vitamin
'Cause my body's sweet like sugar venom, oh yeah
Baby love me cause I'm playing on the radio
(How do you like me now?)"
- Lana Del Rey (Radio)

Reviews

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An excellent write...passionate and raw, like the subject...Great write!

[dan]

This is one of the types of writes I love so very much. To take it apart and analyze it is not the way to view it. Seeing it as one cohesive piece, a single entity, is the true way to appreciate this completely. To put it simply, this is excellent. Thank you to Nadia for sending it to me for review. I've bookmarked your page and will surely try to review more of your wonderful work. I'm of a different musical generation than Lana Del Ray's music but I've gone to youtube and listened to a few pieces and she is definitely the real deal, not some here today gone tomorrow pop princess. My compliments! take care...dan

[Echoes of Eros]

Really appreciate your review, dan. I am glad you came by, and it's great to be connected to you now, and to your writing!

[Mitali Shah]

Seductive piece. I liked your way describing beauty.

[Echoes of Eros]

It is a sweet pleasure to have you thoughts shared here, dear Mitali. xo

[Erotic Goddess]

Storms and dark paradise...you're speaking my brand of erotic here. I really enjoy the visual and mental stimulation in your writing. Thanks for sharing this. xxoxx

[Echoes of Eros]

You know so well, dear Goddess, that the deepest passions and pleasures take root in the depths of the mind before ever touching the body. You teach us that through all your inspirations. So I thank you for stopping for a visit here. :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

A soothing, entrancing siren lullaby to my ears. You've captured the essence of Lana so beautifully, so flawlessly. Thank you for sharing.

[Echoes of Eros]

Nadia, I am very thankful to you for your contest. Have been listening to Lana on repeat the last few days, so it felt good to let the words out. xo

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I've been listening to her on repeat for the past goodness knows how long haha. She's a wonder! Thank you for joining!

[Echoes of Eros]

Ahaha! Well, she is definitely worth repeating! Enjoy every note of her melancholy heaven. :)

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

I will actually attend her concert tomorrow. So excited for that! :O

[Echoes of Eros]

Yes! Okay, if I didn't think you were so awesome I'd be very jealous!! Have fun, like I've got to say that! :D

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

hahahaha....thank you so much! i will tell you all about it!

[Echoes of Eros]

Can't wait to hear!!! Listening still and wishing! :)

[micky]

wow beautiful scenery you have painted with your words. . ..I love this piece

[Echoes of Eros]

I'm so thankful you came by, micky! This was written for a Lana Del Rey contest here. Been listening to her all day. xo

[micky]

Haha I hope u win. ..she is a amazing singer

[Echoes of Eros]

She is! And an amazing poet in song. :)