Dark Paradise

Dark Paradise

A Poem by Echoes of Eros
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Inspired by Lana Del Rey... xo

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My melancholy baby

Woven siren skin of starlight

Do you dream of restless suns?

 

Lips that can kill, kill

Jasmine blue your firelight

Hues of colored rain firing guns?

 

Sing, sweet Lolita, sing

Storms unleash your tones tonight

Dark paradise seducing countless sons?

 


 


 


© 2015 Echoes of Eros


Author's Note

Echoes of Eros
"Lick me up and take me like a vitamin
'Cause my body's sweet like sugar venom, oh yeah
Baby love me cause I'm playing on the radio
(How do you like me now?)"
- Lana Del Rey (Radio)

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wow..shocking..as it has stole the readers attention as normal..great work

Posted 8 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

8 Years Ago

I appreciate you opening your heart here. Lana Del Rey is so inspiring. xo
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First of all, GREAT videos and quotes on your profile page (especially the quote of Gibran...stellar). This write is very brief, but I believe it to be the perfect length for its message. Had you gone on and extended it the power contained in the words would probably have been diluted. Great wordplay and rhythm. take care...dan

Posted 9 Years Ago


I love this! I can just imagine Lana's voice singing the words.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

Thank you, NymphetamineDame! I just love the haunting quality of her voice. xo
AMAZING .... Just AMAZING! I'm speechless. Great work here with the flow! I love it. And seconD thing I AM A HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE HUGE fan of Lana del rey. She is my QUEEN! Love her so much. I've listen to every single of her song SHE IS JUST AMAZING!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

So glad that you enjoyed my poetry, and that you love Lana as well. Yes, she's a beautiful, rich sou.. read more
Destiny Dreamer

9 Years Ago

Indeed! :)
There something about this poem, I not sure what it is but it inspires me!
Keep it up!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

Pleased that you were inspired, Emily! Sorry for my very late reply! xo
Great imagery in this piece and very nice flow. A sweet yet dark write of seductive pleasure.

Posted 9 Years Ago


The song of sweet sirens, forever seducing the heart's of men!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

That she is, marcus; that she is!
super duper yes indeed, is that 25 characters yet?

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

Ha, I think you just got in under the wire! Thank you!
A amazing poem. I'm a big Lana Del Rey fan. You gave life and strength with your strong words and description. When "Sing, sweet Lolita, sing". Few men have a fair chance. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

Coyote, I truly appreciate your thoughts. Thank you!
Coyote Poetry

9 Years Ago

You are welcome.
I really appreciate works that begs more than your cheap attention but really makes you think and evaluate the piece as a whole and line by line . I feel like i could spend hours working though this. Bravo

Posted 9 Years Ago


Echoes of Eros

9 Years Ago

Crystal, thank you so much for your comments. Made me smile after a very long day. xo

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