Teeth in Your Soul

Sweet feast in an ambiance of amber

with those lustful drops of oil’s desire

poured in erogenous crystal shot glasses

here is a decadent banquet in a fine frenzy

and now I sink my teeth in your soul

biting down hard to taste your core

savoring the flavor of your mortality

within your saturated ivory-velvet folds

the luscious fragrance is steamed release

and I chew and swallow your arousal

sweet feast brings an even sweeter release. 

Reviews

[Writing Angel]

your words can almost put the desire in my mind i must admit..
a really amazing write as it takes my mind to different places as once..

[Echoes of Eros]

So grateful that you let your heart surrender into the world of words. It is a most beautiful intoxication. xo

[Writing Angel]

yes it is..as its words take me and my mind to a new level

[TheOne&Only]

A very intimate write!

.......I wonder if your as intimate in "intimacy" as you are intimate with your words.

[Echoes of Eros]

I so appreciate you here, and I hope my words reflect my soul in every way. xo

[TheOne&Only]

hmmm...Very interesting. Its a pleasure.

[Kelly Scheppers]

You leave me drunk on words more intoxicating than I can say. Wow, what passion you stir!

[Echoes of Eros]

You are so kind! How I wish I had more to pour into your sweet glass, dear Kelly. xo

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words. The words create perfect place and needed touch and kiss. Your words make me want to write. I will return in a few days, I'm back to work. You are a outstanding writer.
Coyote

[Echoes of Eros]

Coyote, what an honor to have your words here. So glad mine might inspire your magic, even in just a small way.

[Coyote Poetry]

They did and you are welcome.

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Wow, so beautiful, very well done Eros!!!! 100 rating!

[Echoes of Eros]

Aw, that made me smile! I am very thankful for you! xo

[Valkyrie Warrior]

A feeling that is mutual dear friend! I am glad I made you smile!

[lillythorn]

That was absolutely breath taking... Dig it :) well done

[yvo miki]

wow beautiful poem I loved it

[Erotic Goddess]

The image drew my attention first...the colors beautiful and serene. The imagery and sensations draws me in and I can almost imagine the velvety touches and he drops of oil are intoxicating...

xxoxx

[Echoes of Eros]

It is always bliss to have you read my soul's fire, dear Goddess. xo

[Matching Socks]

To sink your teeth I to ones soul, taste their core, and to like the taste you find there...
That's special. Lovely poem, very sensual, subtly erotic.

[Echoes of Eros]

I always appreciate your sweet presence, Ana! Warm, wonderful holidays for you. xo

[J Otero]

I can't tell which one I want to be: the one devouring or the feast itself. Wonderful.

[Echoes of Eros]

Ah, it's the holiday season, so you can have both gifts. Thank you for your comments! xo