I don't Understand...

I don't Understand...

A Poem by eccath
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Things I guess I kind of don't understand.....

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I don't understand
Why everything has a sound
Why the world is round
Why dogs sneeze when they are nervous. 

But most of all
Why the world is always at war
Why people are scared of the unknown
How Heaven Works
What God looks like. 

What I understand most is
Why friends will always be there
Why your family loves you
Why I am me
Why People don't live forever. 

© 2010 eccath


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eccath
Please give me a review :) I get so many views, but hardly any REviews! :)

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you can edit things on here.
btw, a ton better than mine :) Nice thinking scheme here girly.

Posted 14 Years Ago


...and I dony see any spelling errors Norma

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

THISS IS SOOO GOOD! you are such an AWSOME! poetry writer!!!! I never guessed!!! but these are totally fantasic!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like it! 5th grade poetry?Love it!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This reads well. You do have some spelling errors, they are one of my biggest problems as well. Do you have a dictionary you can look scred up in or a spell check? I'm thinking you mean scared? Good going!

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Added on April 25, 2010
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